Editorial Report 13b

So now Seattle Grace Hospital has been bumped down to number 12 on the ranking and have been bumped down to trauma level 2 instead of 1, so they don't get any of the good cases anymore. It's kinda sad really, I loved the cases.

• The content changed a lot as opposed to the form. I cut down on the introduction and I was able to add more information and facts towards the end to better ease into the topic and the argument.

• The form barely changed with the re-edit. It's not even close to being close to done but I'll get it done no worries.

Intro:

• Selection from rough cut

• Re-edited selection