Editorial Report 13a

Omg Meredith did the cutest thing on the planet and that's a huge step for her since she basically has a black hole for a heart. I'm so proud of her, now she actually has a fighting chance with McDreamy. More to come.

• When I re-edited the concession argument, the content changed a lot more than the form. More specifically, I edited out a lot of umms and likes, also I changed a lot of the script in order to put more supporting evidence in.

• The form barely changed at all, slight video edits but nothing major. Still very rough around the edges and not polished at all.

Body Section 2:

• Selection from rough cut

• Re-edited selection